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And as the blood runs off of this blade,
And drips out onto this far out glade.
I really wish I'd told you no,
I really wish I had told you "don't go".

And as the tears ran from your eye,
I wish I could've made them dry.
But right now I wish more than anything,
That you were mine, because I am nothing.

Without You.

I love you Jennifer.
No, I'm not cutting, yet, I remember my promise.
It just fits into a dream...
I wish I had said these words...
I really, really do... :'( I love you.

Edit : Went viral.
Not a single piece of useful advice.
Yay.
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DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012  Professional Writer
:tears: :huggle:
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KaKashi-GirlFriend Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Alot of people won't have advice or just won't want to share it. But just because you didn't say them before doesn't mean you can't tell her now. It might help.
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Kaelan-Pixie Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012
I can't really give you advice but I can remind you that you aren't alone... I hope everything works out.
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MrRikko Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012
sad but truly great
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:iconmsmysteriousstranger:
((Opens arms and embraces))
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KittyKat0503 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012
This is an amazing poem! Have you considered reciting/telling/sharing this poem with her?
I really believe that she would love to hear this.
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012
I doubt it.
It has cutting in it, for a start.
I've also told her I don't want to lose her.
But every time I tell her, she just says
"I can't talk about this right now".

And yeah -
2 hours ago
Jenni R Watson



i can't. because every time i try and do it, it all goes wrong and i don't know what I'm trying to say. I'm just so confused right now, i don't know if i want to be with you, if i don't. i don't know if we could work, if we couldn't. because what if i DO take you back, but then it turns out it doesn't work out again? i can't do that to you!! i can't do it to myself either. all i wanted today was for you to stop me, when i asked you to speak, i wanted you to say something that would make everything clear, give me a definitive answer one way or the other but in the end, as always whenever we talk about stuff, it came down to me and still makes me wonder after if it was the right thing

^ <--- That.
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KittyKat0503 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012
I think she just needs a bit of time... Right now, she probably want's support. She's scared to break you're heart as well as her own.
Probably because you're the one person she trusts/likes. She probably fears that if something goes wrong, she would/will lose everything/anything she has left.

I suggest that you be there, and support her. Show her that you're willing to wait for her and be there for her. That she doesn't have to be scared about what will happen and you will help her through that.

That's the best advice I can give from what I've read. But supporting her and showing her that you really do like/love her and care for her, could take a while. Eventually she will realize that and be thankful that you do.
I do hope this helps.
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012
Impossible. I said as much, but then she said to leave her alone for a week.
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KittyKat0503 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
Hmmm... Has she said anything odd lately? Like, something such as, she hasn't been feeling good lately or gotten together and recently split up? You don't have to answer these... Just trying to help... If I had someone like you who was showing interest like you, I wouldn't be saying for you to leave me alone without a reason...
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