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I see the look in your eye as you follow her around the room,

I saw the poem you wrote, and told her she'd know whom.

Who it was for is what she asked, and walked off without a clue,

And you stared at her back whispering "I love you.".

 

Well, I'm going to be nice and give you a warning here,

This one is mine, and only mine, do I make myself clear?

I know she loves me more than words can express,

And I tell you, she is mine, that girl in that dress.

 

I read that poem, and I must tell you something,

I love her, and she loves me, for me she would do anything.

So, whatever you're waiting for, the right place, the right time?

Stop waiting, because I'm not letting go, I'm telling you. She's mine.

I love you :heart:
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taoMega20 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
this sounds soooo romantic, i just have to ask, who is the girl?
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suzukoyan Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Student Artisan Crafter
awwwww :glomp:
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Mierren Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i like it. it gives off enough to create a scene in your mind
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DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Professional Writer
:huggle:
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The-K10 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013
Oh the fine line between possession and obsession.
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Dannums Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This poem is beautiful :3 Nice work.
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WinterWolf10 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Amazing job as always! :D Such powerful words in this piece.
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Kalika-Shai Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Student General Artist
Oo I like it!! Sounds like something my boyfriend would say about me. Hehe.
Now..who is it you love? ;3
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Darksknight Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013   Writer
Amazing as always!
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Lunesra Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013
Intense, well composed, descriptive and flows incredibly well. One of my favourites so far!
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