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I always have nightmares, it's something I can't control,

But the topic always changes, again, something I can't control.

Have you ever felt so alone in the world, you're like a shadow?

Have you ever been too scared to look out of the window?

 

I was, I was too scared to check if it was really tomorrow or today,

I was too afraid to see if what had happened, really happened to me.

I woke up with a heartbreaking sadness, and nothing to do,

I woke up with a crushing fear, and there was nothing I could do.

 

In my dream, there was always one place I longed to be,

And when I finally got there, it was no longer welcome to me.

But there is one thing I know now, and it is the reality,

And there is one thing I can tell you, that it scares me.

 

The reality is I love her, I knew I did of course,

But this just means I'm going to get hurt, I can take it of course...

I keep trying to find a way to make us mend,

I just don't want to, because I don't want this to end,

 

 

But if anything; this week has taught me that all things come to an end.

 

Of course, it's just a nightmare...
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TheReverendofDrugs Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This reminds me of the entire Leave a Whisper album by Shinedown ... It has the same feel to it.
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012
Never heard of it.
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TheReverendofDrugs Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's fairly dark and realization-like. Needless to say I loved this piece :)
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012
Thanks.
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UnleashHiddenMonster Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Student Writer
I as very impressed by your writting skills. The style is also very unique. I look forward to reading other pieces by you.
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Midda-the-Cat Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I heard that dreams are images of our thoughts, and anxieties. Sometimes I doubt if it's true but there are moments I believe it is. Quite long time ago I had a nightmare. I was killing people. Since that night I haven't forget it and I have been thinking why I was the murderer. Why I dreamed about such thing? Whenever I remind myself about that I'm a bit afraid. I still remember that nightmare very well.
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012
You did a second one xD
I understood the first fine Midda :)
I got what you were getting at, did your Dad correct it for you?
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Midda-the-Cat Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh, so I'm sorry. It sometimes can happen. Also I must read at least twice what I wrote because I type too quickly for tablet's keyboard and it can miss a letter or two.
no, no. He doesn't visit dA X3 When I was lying on my bed and started to fall asleep I suddenly reminded myself that I forgot about -er :D
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012
xDDDD It's okay :)
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Midda-the-Cat Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Dreams, nightmares are apperantly images of our thoughts, emotions and anxieties. Sometimes I doubt if it's true but there are moments I really believe in it. I dreamed once that I was killing people. I remember that dream very well and I'm still scared why I was the one who was a murder. Why I even dreamed about that?
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