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I always have nightmares, it's something I can't control,

But the topic always changes, again, something I can't control.

Have you ever felt so alone in the world, you're like a shadow?

Have you ever been too scared to look out of the window?

 

I was, I was too scared to check if it was really tomorrow or today,

I was too afraid to see if what had happened, really happened to me.

I woke up with a heartbreaking sadness, and nothing to do,

I woke up with a crushing fear, and there was nothing I could do.

 

In my dream, there was always one place I longed to be,

And when I finally got there, it was no longer welcome to me.

But there is one thing I know now, and it is the reality,

And there is one thing I can tell you, that it scares me.

 

The reality is I love her, I knew I did of course,

But this just means I'm going to get hurt, I can take it of course...

I keep trying to find a way to make us mend,

I just don't want to, because I don't want this to end,

 

 

But if anything; this week has taught me that all things come to an end.

 

Of course, it's just a nightmare...
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TheReverendofDrugs Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This reminds me of the entire Leave a Whisper album by Shinedown ... It has the same feel to it.
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012
Never heard of it.
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TheReverendofDrugs Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's fairly dark and realization-like. Needless to say I loved this piece :)
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012
Thanks.
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UnleashHiddenMonster Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Student Writer
I as very impressed by your writting skills. The style is also very unique. I look forward to reading other pieces by you.
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Midda-the-Cat Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I heard that dreams are images of our thoughts, and anxieties. Sometimes I doubt if it's true but there are moments I believe it is. Quite long time ago I had a nightmare. I was killing people. Since that night I haven't forget it and I have been thinking why I was the murderer. Why I dreamed about such thing? Whenever I remind myself about that I'm a bit afraid. I still remember that nightmare very well.
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012
You did a second one xD
I understood the first fine Midda :)
I got what you were getting at, did your Dad correct it for you?
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Midda-the-Cat Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh, so I'm sorry. It sometimes can happen. Also I must read at least twice what I wrote because I type too quickly for tablet's keyboard and it can miss a letter or two.
no, no. He doesn't visit dA X3 When I was lying on my bed and started to fall asleep I suddenly reminded myself that I forgot about -er :D
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012
xDDDD It's okay :)
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Midda-the-Cat Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Dreams, nightmares are apperantly images of our thoughts, emotions and anxieties. Sometimes I doubt if it's true but there are moments I really believe in it. I dreamed once that I was killing people. I remember that dream very well and I'm still scared why I was the one who was a murder. Why I even dreamed about that?
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Midda-the-Cat Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*murderer and sorry if I posted same or similar comments, my tablet sometimes goes crazy
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raynroq Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I usually don't comment but I had to when i read this, it's really beautiful and sad. Amazing work and thank you for sharing it with the world. I hope you can overcome this. LUCK WISH!
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Fantasy-WarriorX Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nightmares. . . the problem is that they feel so real and you get swept away thinking that it is reality and when you wake up, you get that dreading feeling looming over you that it could be true. Very well written
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LivingInMyThoughts Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
This is kind of... the kind of beautiful that makes the entire audience cry, I guess. I hope your nightmares go away... :)
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
They haven't since I was little, don't know why they'd start now.
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Student Writer
That's really quite scary, if nightmares were reality, yet the two are already meshed together...
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
Well my head just went "What's the last thing to go wrong now?"
Then targetted it.
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Student Writer
Nice.
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dream-haunter Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
<3
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BlueDarkAngelWings Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
Sweet!!!
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TheAmericanRealist Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Student Writer
Reaper... As much as we have a love/hate (mostly hate) relationship... I do have to admit your writing is amazing.
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
Thanks I guess Realist.
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TheAmericanRealist Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Student Writer
It's a compliment! Appreciate it before I take it back... >.>
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012
I did. I said thanks.
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TheAmericanRealist Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Student Writer
You sounded almost... reluctant.
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012
I don't take pride in bearing my feelings to the world, Realist.
I'm a secretive man, you if anyone should understand that.
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TheAmericanRealist Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Student Writer
Then you must not know much about me... I am a fool and proud of it!
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012
Realist, for once, just get the fuck out of character.
That's your ONLY annoying trait, your one thing one minute.
And the next you're something completely fucking contradictory.
Get some idea of who the fuck you are. NOW.
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PhotoTAKER1497 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Student Photographer
just lovely darling! i hope that you have a better week!
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
Hah! So do I.
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PhotoTAKER1497 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Student Photographer
well..how was your week my dear? hm? :tighthug: i hope it was great!!
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
Awful. Terrible.
Read my most recent poem.
It'll tie into this one.
This one's a prediction.
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PhotoTAKER1497 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Student Photographer
oh....what happened? /": my week was not so good either..
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NekoNinja13 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
i feel like this alit
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Kailani-e Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
:hug: "Don't cry because it ended, smile because it happened."
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
"The final goodbye, Death and The End."
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Kailani-e Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
"Because we are forever, and we never say goodbye"
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
Varus Morghulis. All men must die.
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Kailani-e Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
"Because we are forever" and "Death shalt never doth us part" (I'm pretty sure that's how the second quote goes)
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
Valar Morghulis *
xD (You're right, but it's about the seasons, not humans)
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Kailani-e Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
xD Ahahaha..... Okay T___T Sorry....... I feel extremely stupid today T______T
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Kailani-e Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I hope you have better dreams.
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WinterWolf10 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Beautifully written, and it felt so real. I wasn't sure if it truly real or not.
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
It didn't happen, but the feelings I put down are real :/
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WinterWolf10 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
That makes sense. :hug:
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lucylou1710 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
this is amazing. wow :')
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
It's not, at all xD
However, not the kinda thing you'd expect from me, eh? XD
And pfft, it was a nightmare, I have a few a week :shrug:
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JJmyster22 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
As always, your brilliant talent for writing shines through today as well. Yikes, well oh dear. But this is very. . . Captivating.
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AbysmalEternity Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Just a nightmare, eh? The way you worded it, it doesn't necessarily seem as such. But maybe you're just being truthful and I'm just feeling too insightful in my tired state.
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
It felt real. Like, really real.
And I woke up thinking it might've happened.
And then was too scared to do anything about it :/
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