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I talked to her today,
It was brief, but it went okay.
She seems sad still, but getting better,
I'm glad about that, even if it makes me sadder.

I talked to her yesterday too, tried to win her back,
Didn't work, looks like we can't just go back.
We agreed to not talk for a week you know,
 I was too weak for that though...


I broke my promise, I hate to do it, but I have to sometimes,
Anyone knows I don't break them, if they read my rhymes.
Only reason we broke up was I wasn't selfish enough,
So maybe it's a good thing I wasn't too tough.

I still regret making, and breaking, that one last promise to her,
I still really wish I could tell her, "I love you Jennifer."
But no, I can't do that, I have to be keep quiet,
I promised to, but of my promises, I am tired...

I just wanna be selfish... I just want her...
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Kailani-e Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
: ( :hug:
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Tomaolykos Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Don't worry, bro. You will have her back someday. Besides, what's romance for if there is no fight? Fights only strengthen it, just like friendship.
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WinterWolf10 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Reaper, I'm so sorry you feel this way. :(
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CoLoRFuLLCaTT Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012
I doubt you took my advice on this, but this is pretty much what I said would be best. By the end of the week you will have all of your thoughts and feelings organized and be able to talk to her and tell her what she needs to know/hear from you, understand? I know its going to be hard for the first few days but if you can entertain yourself with friends, an activity, writing or even school. It will go by so much faster and help you clear your mind. Because when you talk to her again and your still upset, worried, depressed or even bitter it might make things worse in the long run. Maybe you guys just need a fresh start, some times that's all it is.

I'm not trying to lecture you or anything, and i'm sure you already know this stuff but I am just making sure. :) You seem to be a very loving and compassionate person from what I can tell, so I just want everything to work out for you soooo much! I don't want you to be sad or hurting inside, so I'm hoping for the very best! Just keep your head high! You probably think i'm weird :P ha
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DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012  Professional Writer
Oh sweetie...:huggle:
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012
.... :( :huggle:
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DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Professional Writer
*holds close* I am here :iconbackhug:
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012
:huggle: ...
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Midda-the-Cat Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh, Reaper, I'd like so much you both to be happy. "Time cures wounds" like someone said once. I think it will be okay eventually :) The time now is very helpful. Everyone sometimes needs to be alone to think, think, think about important stuff. Try to give yourself a little break, you are often so worried!
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012
I am.... Trying to not to talk to her for a week... It's so hard though...
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