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Would've been six months today,
That's why I ignore your question.
The question "Is everything okay?",
Why even bother with that inquisition?
It's obvious that I'm not great,
Everyone knows the reason too.

Don't try cover it up, it's too late,
You're trying to hurt me, aren't you?
You're horrible people, all of you,
Why hurt me? What did I do?
You're evil to me, all of you,
I don't get how she can like you.

But that's not my problem anymore,
So, I'll leave you to her, she deserves you.
People rubbing it in my face that I got dumped, again.
And on what would've been our sixth month anniversary.
What lovely friends my ex-girlfriend has.
You know what's worse? I keep forgetting to add the ex.
I still love her, so comments that wouldn't hurt, cut me deep.
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Professional Writer
I won't ask if you are okay, but I will say, "I am here for you" :huggle: :heart:
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:iconcontradictory55:
Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Student Writer
It feels like it's for self-satisfaction that they're asking. For peace of mind, to be able to go 'oh, Doug is okay, we don't have to worry about them' because at heart, there is much selfishness in all humans, and they want to know that all is right with everyone else so that they may deal with their own problems....
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:iconforgotten-reaper:
Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012
Nah...
It's to hurt me some more.
People asked me "So, how's Jenni?" knowing full well we broke up.
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:iconcontradictory55:
Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Student Writer
Damn but people are full-out jerks.
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:iconforgotten-reaper:
Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012
Yes, they are.
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:iconcontradictory55:
Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Student Writer
:nod:
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TridentWielder Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm sorry bro ( sorry if calling you bro bothers you, I just call everyone that. Like everyone's family, I don't know it's just a thing). Anyways though, I read your stuff and I'm left speechless every time, but I thought why not comment this time? But I know where you're coming from and by the stuff you write I don't think you deserve all this rubbish. You seem like a good person and I'm sorry about what you go through. Really, I am. That probably doesn't mean much but I felt like sharing. Just remember you're not alone out there. Once again, your work is magnificent, beautiful, from the soul, and a bunch of other words that I don't have the time to write down.
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:iconkalika-shai:
Kalika-Shai Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012  Student General Artist
I'm so sorry Doug :(
I wish I could take that pain away.
And you know, I never did understand why
people ask a question such as "is everything okay?"
when the answer is obvious.
Hang in there.
Message me if you need to.
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:iconforgotten-reaper:
Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012
They did it to rub it in...
They were her friends, not mine.
I also got "How's Jenni?!" shouted at me multiple times.
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:iconkalika-shai:
Kalika-Shai Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Student General Artist
I'm sorry. :/
People are cruel.
How have you been doing?
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:iconforgotten-reaper:
Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012
Yesterday; yesterday was good.
"THERE ARE THREE TYPES OF DRUNK!
TIPSY! DRUNK! WASTED!
I AM THE OTHER FUCKING SIDE OF WASTED!"

Great day, quote from myself, by the way.
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:iconkalika-shai:
Kalika-Shai Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Student General Artist
Haha very nice! Makes sense. Although, being on the other side of wasted is when you can no longer walk :P
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:iconforgotten-reaper:
Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012
I couldn't :')
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:iconkalika-shai:
Kalika-Shai Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Student General Artist
Oh boy. Haha.
Then you could call yourself plastered..or shitfaced. xD
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:iconforgotten-reaper:
Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012
Yup, all of the above.
So out of it xDDD
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:iconmidda-the-cat:
Midda-the-Cat Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I feel completely confused. I know nothing about how you're feeling. I can write nothing to cheer you up. I don't want to spam you with hugs and sorries, so I don't really write comments.
I read everything you write and feel helpless. And I don't want you to think I don't care. Just know I'm kinda... nah, can't find English word :facepalm: I hope you know what I mean.
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:iconforgotten-reaper:
Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012
I do. You're just helpless to do anything for me, that's all.
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:iconmidda-the-cat:
Midda-the-Cat Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
But the problem is I can't stand my helplessness. I hate such feeling.
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:iconforgotten-reaper:
Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012
I get it, but it helps just to know that you care :) :huggle:
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:iconmidda-the-cat:
Midda-the-Cat Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Then I'm glad it does :hugle:
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:iconforgotten-reaper:
Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012
I know, but it helps me that you care :) :huggle:
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:iconsecretlyfading:
SecretlyFading Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012  Student Writer
:'(
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