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I miss you, y'know... Soon as you're gone,

It hurts to want to hug you and there be no one.

I miss you as soon as I stop talking to you,

I miss you even when we talk, unless I'm hugging you.

 

I know it's pathetic, I really do...

But I guess it's just because I love you.

Sometimes I'm scared there'll be no one there

But then I wake up, and thank God it's a nightmare.

 

Jennifer, I want you to believe that I love you

And I want to hear that you love me too.

Jennifer, I love you and I love you true.

 And I'm not ashamed to say that I need you.

Written for :iconacousticrose: I don't care who else reads it. I don't care who else likes it. It's for her.
It deleted the last line ._.
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thebronzkunoichi Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
awww
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Hedgerytheking Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
This is adorable ^_^
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MebutREAlizeD Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
that's so sweet :')
you're just a pile of mush XD
But in a good way I swear!
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012
Mhm, worst thing is I've heard this before.
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MebutREAlizeD Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
heh :thumbsup:
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suzukoyan Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Student Artisan Crafter
i so feel that way about some one, but i'm too shy to tell him
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WolfsThorn Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012
I think you should try to refrain from rhyming the same words like 'you' and 'you' just because it never flows as well as if you had used something else... but that may just be personal preference.. idk

Sweet poem though (: Glad you're so happy
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012
Read the description XD
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WolfsThorn Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012
For future reference.
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Angelcakes21 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
D'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.
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shad0wbeast Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Student Writer
HADOUKEN! :iconryuplz::iconhadoukenplz:


....just had to be different. ;P it's a sweet poem. >w<
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012
XD
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shad0wbeast Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Student Writer
:D
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chiaroscuro24176 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012
That's sweet. Reminds me of me and my other.
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NekoNinja13 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012
very nice, exactly like me and my girlfriend
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glossolalias Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012
"And I'm not ashamed to say that I need you."


this is very sweet.
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012
Thanks, is it an okay poem then in your eyes? :)
I value your opinion on these matters XD
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glossolalias Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012
yes, and you managed not to end every line with a period (: it's another one of those that's "too personal" for me to really critique, but it's very very sweet. young love and all.
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012
XD Thank ye.
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WithWords Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012
Awww! :aww:
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012
Half the comments on this poem have had "Awww" in them XD
But thanks.
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mizukilen Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012
your not alone. i get that feeling everyday with ammon. i hope you two last for a long and loving time. (me don'ts want to jinks it!) :love:
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AcousticRose Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012
yay :3 I miss you too...better hug me later or else ;P :heart: love you too :heart: :iconbunnyglompplz:
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Sutsuki-Sensei Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012
Beautiful piece. ^^
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zeldagirl236 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awww....i bet she loves this!
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Fantasy-WarriorX Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:hug:
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WinterWolf10 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Awwwwwwwwwwwww! :)
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Tomaolykos Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awwwwwwwww! That is cute!
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