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I miss you, y'know... Soon as you're gone,

It hurts to want to hug you and there be no one.

I miss you as soon as I stop talking to you,

I miss you even when we talk, unless I'm hugging you.

 

I know it's pathetic, I really do...

But I guess it's just because I love you.

Sometimes I'm scared there'll be no one there

But then I wake up, and thank God it's a nightmare.

 

Jennifer, I want you to believe that I love you

And I want to hear that you love me too.

Jennifer, I love you and I love you true.

 And I'm not ashamed to say that I need you.

Written for :iconacousticrose: I don't care who else reads it. I don't care who else likes it. It's for her.
It deleted the last line ._.
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:iconhedgerytheking:
This is adorable ^_^
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MebutREAlizeD Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
that's so sweet :')
you're just a pile of mush XD
But in a good way I swear!
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:iconforgotten-reaper:
Mhm, worst thing is I've heard this before.
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:iconmebutrealized:
MebutREAlizeD Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
heh :thumbsup:
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suzukoyan Jul 15, 2012  Student Artisan Crafter
i so feel that way about some one, but i'm too shy to tell him
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:iconwolfsthorn:
I think you should try to refrain from rhyming the same words like 'you' and 'you' just because it never flows as well as if you had used something else... but that may just be personal preference.. idk

Sweet poem though (: Glad you're so happy
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:iconforgotten-reaper:
Read the description XD
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:iconwolfsthorn:
For future reference.
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Angelcakes21 Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
D'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.
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shad0wbeast Jul 12, 2012  Student Writer
HADOUKEN! :iconryuplz::iconhadoukenplz:


....just had to be different. ;P it's a sweet poem. >w<
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