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You were changing, I saw it, but you didn't know,
You changed from who I love to someone I don't know.
I wanted to see who I loved, so I tried my best,
And I saw her, fleetingly, hidden within your breast.

Now, I beseech you, if you've changed, then change,
Don't throw me away for nothing, that's beyond strange.
Don't torture me with the image, of the girl I still love,
Don't torture me with the image of an angel from above.

If you want to change, then please, do so,
Change into a girl that I don't want to know.
Just don't turn into the girl that I love again,
Because I cannot handle being thrown away again.

So if you want, then stop being the girl I love,
Don't torture me with the girl whom I will always love.
A poem completely laced with denial...
It says I wouldn't take her back if she's changed this much.
But truth is? I really, really, would.
It's not rational to think like that though, so I try say I wouldn't.
But I would in a heartbeat...
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012  Professional Writer
:huggle:
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012
:huggle: Why are you sad..?
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DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012  Professional Writer
Because...
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012
Hey, cheer up :heart: :hug:
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DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012  Professional Writer
I will try :heart: :huggle:
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Student Writer
Rationality and love don't often go hand-in-hand I think.
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AyJayAyJay Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012
Im pretty sure I have been in a situation like this, sadly I feel like the girl who you are talking about. I know this probably won't help but if she has any kind of heart she probably feels like an asshole, I would know. Anyways I wanted to comment because your poetry makes it really easy for me to feel your pain and to relate to it, or just want to try to understand it for some reason. Its very well written. You will find someone else who will make you want to write about everything lovely under the sun one day, just keeping moving forward.
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012
Unless I die beforehand, there's always that possibility.
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ActingDude17 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012  Student Writer
The ending has such a great flow to it. There are some great concepts here on deviantART, but seldom are they executed with style this neat. Well done.
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012
Thank you ever so much :)
Look through some of my other stuff if you liked this, this is hardly great.
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