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I'll slit my throat from ear to ear,
I'll watch your party from hell, as you cheer.
"You okay?" I shake my head.
I hate my life, I want to drop down dead.

I wonder if she'd care if I died.
No, probably not, she knows I lied.
I wonder if anyone would.
No, probably not, everyone thinks I should.

Tell a girl you like her, she'll smile and kiss you.
Tell a girl you like her, she'll smile and play with you.
Tell a girl you love her, she'll freeze and then leave.
Tell a girl you love her, she'll crush your heart, no reprieve.

When a girl says she loves you, when she knows she shouldn't.
It always confuses me, they always know I couldn't.
They back away slowly, scared of what might come next.
They back away slowly, knowing that was best left unsaid.

They love me, and yet they back away?
They love me, and yet they look away?
If they really loved me, surely they'd hug me, kiss me.
If they really loved me, surely they'd look at me, smile at me.

I don't know what goes through girl's minds.
How they can play with you, why they tell you their lies.
Why they can't just tell you if they love you or not.
Rather than playing with you, than tying your heart in a knot.

You know what? Screw it, I'll kill myself now.
It'll make you all happy, I'm not loved anyhow.
I can watch when I die, wherever I go.
I'll watch you and laugh, because I know.

Better off dead than played with like this.
Better off dead than stabbed with a kiss.
Better off dead than falling in love.
It's called falling for a reason, you hit hard, like a broken dove.
Meh XD I like this one, but it's old.
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:iconthechaoswithinorder:
TheChaoswithinOrder Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012
well... I think killing yourself over a girl, is a bit much, but what do I know? Honestly I like your style and you write well. Keep up the good work... just don't kill yourself over it....
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012
:iconbowplz: Thank you :)
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:iconthechaoswithinorder:
TheChaoswithinOrder Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012
Oh the pleasure is mine for having sampled your works.
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:iconforgotten-reaper:
Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012
:iconbowplz:
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:iconforgotten-reaper:
Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012
:iconbunnyglompplz:
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:iconforgotten-reaper:
Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012
Damn it, you stole my next go-to option! :iconsuperheroglompplz:
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Tomaolykos Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow. That was deep.
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:iconfantasy-warriorx:
Fantasy-WarriorX Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow. I felt like I've taken a knife to the heart for this one. Amazing. . .
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:iconforgotten-reaper:
Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012
Thank you.
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:iconfantasy-warriorx:
Fantasy-WarriorX Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
your welcome :)
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lennykagamine19 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012
Oh this is SO beautiful! I'm so sorry if love has treated you this way (reminds me of my ex bf -fuck him). We have al been there and just wanted love to end as well as our lives because love and life has treated horribly. Like the poem tho ^^
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Sutsuki-Sensei Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012
Not all girls are like that. Not all of us will play with hearts and such.

But this was still a good piece, either way. ^^
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Student Writer
I like it too, but it made me really worried as well...:crying: I was reading it, and I must nod my head to it as well, but at the same time, I was like 'OH FRICK. SUICIDAL THOUGHTS AGAIN.' So...I'm glad it's in the past ^^
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WildFangWolf Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't know whether it's sad that I can relate to this or not...

But it's beautiful. :)
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Skylark-13 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Student Writer
... :glomp:
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:iconaalie:
aalie Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Student General Artist
Wow. This is amazing. and I feel your pain. :hug: i wish you didn't feel this way
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zeldagirl236 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
omg....no dont....dont die...it'll be alright....nobody is worth for death....:hug:....its gonna be alright....
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MebutREAlizeD Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw :(
But damn this poem is.. amazing. But it's kinda triggering just saying :/
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:iconforgotten-reaper:
Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012
Thank you.
Sorry.
Happy Birthday for tomorrow.
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MebutREAlizeD Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :)
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WithWords Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012
I found it a bit disturbing, I hope you never feel this way. :(

I like the last line, though. :)
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BabyShoeLaces Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Student General Artist
this... is... awesome :sniff:
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:iconcorporalcornbread:
CorporalCornbread Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I thought it was true at first, and then I saw the description, and I was all like "Thank everything, that would have been so sad" Awesome writing, keep it up :thumbsup:
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Ivylis Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
"It's called falling for a reason, you hit hard, like a broken dove."
I love it, great job ^^
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TheManThatLaughed Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Idc if its old or not I like it :D
Nice job Jermy XD
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DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Professional Writer
It doesn't matter if it is old. I really like it :tighthug:
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ILUVSP31 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:jawdrop:
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:iconforgotten-reaper:
Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012
what? XD
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ILUVSP31 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You are such a sad...person sometimes.
I was just going through and then BAM, hit with saddness and goosebumps.
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012
XD
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ILUVSP31 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You know, you barely talk to me. :(
That makes me even sadder...
We use to be TIGHT. And now. Meh.
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012
Awww, come on Paige <3 :huggle:
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ILUVSP31 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Why you no talk to me that much then xD
:glomp:
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012
I sorry! :icondragonhugplz:
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WinterWolf10 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Okay, I know this may be bad to say but this is awesome! I'm sorry you felt that way but damn! This is amazing!
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:iconforgotten-reaper:
Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012
Heh, thank you :')
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WinterWolf10 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
You're welcome. :)
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Kalika-Shai Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2011  Student General Artist
Hey now. I do not play games like that or lie.
I am as truthful as they come.

But it was good...I liked it...even if you do feel that way. :/
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:iconforgotten-reaper:
Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2011
I know, but it wasn't about you Miranda.
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:iconkalika-shai:
Kalika-Shai Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2011  Student General Artist
I know...it was just consolation. :)
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:iconforgotten-reaper:
Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2011
Okay :) and.. :glomp:
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:iconkalika-shai:
Kalika-Shai Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2011  Student General Artist
I suppose I deserved that one. :hug:
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:iconforgotten-reaper:
Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2011
Yep :P
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nekochan5123 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
omg this is so awesome.
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:iconforgotten-reaper:
Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2011
Hah, thanks... Wish I didn't feel this way though... :fork:
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nekochan5123 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
I knowww. I just met you and I don't want you to feel that way. NJKFSGBDFUBSERIOGHOH!!! 3:l
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2011
What the hell is the.. Wait... Lemme get this right..
"NJKFSGBDFUBSERIOGHOH" <---- What the fuck does that mean?
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nekochan5123 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
XD I have no idea. See, I got so upset, I slammed my head down on my keyboard out of frustration and to express my unhappiness, resulting in those letters, which I thought were funny, and me going, "Oh, fuck myself, MY HEAD IS WOUNDED."
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