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If the world could stop spinning, that'd be great,


I don't want time to stop, that'd be worse, the wait.


I just want it all to stop, for existence to not exist,


I would want to die if it weren't that my problems would persist.


 


I want the world to stop spinning,


My problems can't be solved by simply not living.


I don't want to live anymore,


I don't want to exist anymore.


 


I want the world to stop spinning, I want to get off,


I want it all to stop, both hard times and soft.


I just want it all to stop, I want existence to cease,


I want the world to stop spinning... Please?

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:iconblackxforever:
:hug: You manage to transpose emotions into words so well... I must admit that I'm envious of your talent. x
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Contradictory55 Oct 16, 2012  Student Writer
Yet unfortunately, it cannot....
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:iconmaddhatter4850:
I like the concept or image this creates. And good luck trying to get off this spinning world, there are plenty of things that will yank you right back on whether you like it or not :P
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DarlingAngel0565 Oct 16, 2012  Professional Writer
:huggle:
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Kailani-e Oct 16, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Feels like a Merry Go Round slowly speeding up, as the horses slowly change into demons as you ride upon their backs. And the doors bar, and you're locked in a children's toy turned devil's ground. Forever locked inside the turning rounds.

:I We all have those days, and sometimes they last longer than others. Beautiful and yet so sad.
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BlueDarkAngelWings Oct 16, 2012
Such a true poem.
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Kalika-Shai Oct 16, 2012  Student General Artist
This turned out lovely. I like the concept and I think many people know that feeling.
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Midda-the-Cat Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I read the first verse, than thought "I'd rather want time to stop". I read the second verse and I was like
... X3

I still can't imagine... nothing. So many things and people not existing anymore, just shut down. *tries to see it in mind anyway* Nah, that overhelms me
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:iconforgotten-reaper:
Hah, can't imagine nothing?
We had a great ancient civilization multiple times.
Know what happened to all of them?
They vanished. They were evolving, then they disappear.
There's never any discernible reason either, they just go.
And that's what'll happen to us, sometime soon.
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Midda-the-Cat Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yes, you're right and I agree. But even though I can't imagine our civilization dissapear. You know, I draw, paint. I live by picture, so maybe that's why that "nothing" is hard to imagine for me :P whatever, everything has its end and I agree also with that. For now, I try to live in present and not think much about future. It doesn't look very well.
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