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I'm going to cry for all I've lost,
And you can't or won't stop me.
I'm going to die for all I was,
And all you'll do is watch me.

I'm going to hide from you,
Afraid to show my weakness.
I would happily die for you,
But I still regret this.

I didn't want this life,
I didn't want these tears.
I didn't want this life,
I didn't want these fears.

I used to cause myself pain,
To make sure I still feel.
I'll do it now and again,
To make sure it's still real.

I'm going to cry for all I've lost,
And you can't stop me.
These tears I cry at my cost,
For once will flow freely.
You know what's the saddest part of this story?
Not these precious few tears that I cry,
But that I can only express myself through poetry,
Not these fears that I must hide.

But this tale grows sadder still,
Because the reader will read what they will.
I address this to few that will understand,
It was not written for you,
It was written for the Damned.
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George551 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
Speaking as a poetry critic, this is brilliant and very well made,

Speaking as a cynical person stop mooching around and get a grip ;)

On a serious note though, this was very good :)
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
Speaking as someone in your country - It's midnight, go to bed kid.
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George551 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
Oh piss off :P, it's friday (ie saturday tomorrow) There's nothing going on due to exam season, I'm not technically a child, and I have resolved to go through everything in my inbox from the past few months.
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George551 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
Well, I went through the rest of that, were the hell did you find it? it's bloody disturbing.
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
Should've gone to bed when you had the chance.
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George551 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
Yeah, I sorta thought that was a tactic of yours, devious, I am going to bed now, thank you for your concern. Worries as to how you found such a thing are best left until...well...never.

'night mate
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
Goodnight :)
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George551 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
"all her joints in her body were twisted, but worse her hair was a mess,"

How is that, in any way, worse than having reversed joints?

OH SH*T SHE TURNED THE F*CK AROUND! JESUS!

Well, thanks for that, that comic sufficiently disturbed me.
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
XD
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