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Words of the Great by aalie

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September 16, 2012
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One, apologise profusely, whatever it was, was your fault,

Two, talk it out! Silent treatment just prolongs things.

Three, if you love them, tell them, make sure they can't forget,

Four, if they're mad because you wrong their friend, apologise to them too.


Five, don't buy her things, fixing it that way is stupid,

Six, you may buy her things to apologise with.

Seven, don't treat him badly just 'cause you're upset with him,

Eight, making him angry because you're angry will destroy it.


Nine, tell the truth, "I was exhausted, wasn't thinking right,"

Ten, listen to their reasons, don't just treat them with disdain.

Eleven, always try keep your promises to your other half,

Twelve, accept that your other half is not God, and will break one or two.


Thirteen, do not bitch to your friends about him or her,

Fourteen, only ask for help from them when hurt, bitching tears it apart.

Fifteen, remember you love the other person and treat them accordingly,

And finally, tell the other everything, or how can they ever trust you?

My list~
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xMoonlightAngelx Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
There is so much truth in this list. If someone truly reads what you have written here, their relationship stands a chance.

Though 14. Is hard, especially if said person doesn't know how to ask for help, or maybe is ashamed of their situation. Also the person might not be able to help. :(

I do really love all the other ones though, allot. Especially 3, 7, 10, 11, 13, 15 and the last one. Trust is so important in a relationship.
chiaroscuro24176 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012
I love this work
Seeingeye12 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012
Sorry for your loss. I just ended a relationship for reasons I often find ridiculous looking back but if they caused that much strife was it really meant to be? I don't know the circumstances but she is missing out for leaving you from what I can see on here. Keep your head up, you might miss that someone that notices what makes you great.
Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012
She was that someone.
Hell, she said "Be happy, someone amazing might come along."
Well, someone amazing already did.
And look how that turned out.
Seeingeye12 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012
Only advice I can think of is to talk to whoever you can about it cause its not going to go away easily. Very smart advice I was given was that in relationships we fill the holes in ourselves with others, but for us to truly be happy we need to work on filling those holes ourselves. That way when someone comes along they are not being used to make you feel better about yourself but they truly make you a better person and you will be happy. I was the one that ended my latest and greatest relationship and i still feel like it was a huge mistake, but I can't forgive myself to go back till I can at least fix the problems I see in myself. Otherwise what good am I to her? You sound like a smart, nice guy. Think about all the things you did right versus what you may have done wrong and find the courage to say you can be a better you. :)
Kailani-e Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Oh my god. I'm so sorry :hug: I don't know what else to say. You must feel numb and cold and I can only barely imagine how it must feel. I've been in a "relationship" (if you can even call it that) too so I have a small glimpse of your pain. (But now I just kinda almost plain hate the guy soo....)
I'm so sorry. Stay strong.
Midda-the-Cat Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I read comments below. I'm sorry :(
Hmm.. if it comes to me, I've never been in relationship, so..I don't really know how it is and how you feel. All I can write is that I'm sorry. But be sure these words are true.
And yeah, irony is one of the most irritating things, I guess.
Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012
XD That it is.
WinterWolf10 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I like this. Very true. :)
Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012
Fucking ironic though, considering the day I write this she breaks up with me.
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