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I hate being in a heightened emotional state,

Be it from pain, or just anguish from all life's hate.

I hate feeling like I'm about to cry, especially when I do,

Mostly how when it's in the little things, that I cry at like I do.

 

"What are you crying at?" Your poems to me, don't you realise?

"Why are you crying at them?" Because they're all lies.

I wish they weren't, and I wish I could believe them, I do,

But "I'm going nowhere"? You proved that wrong, didn't you?

 

Jennifer, I tell you again, that I love you,

But it hurts that you treat me the way you do.

I know it's not your fault, and I know we're back together,

But we broke up, and that stuff just doesn't heal right over...

No groups. Everyone who needs to read this will.
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Kailani-e Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
:hug: I'm so sorry. I wish I had more than words to comfort you with.
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DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Professional Writer
:huggle: :heart:
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Kalika-Shai Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Student General Artist
That's so sad. :( I'm sorry you have to go through that. Just remember I'm here for you if you need to vent or talk or anything.
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Student Writer
I wish to console the emotions I feel coming from this poem, but I really can't. :/
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Lunesra Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
[link] song's called Battle Scars by Guy Sebastian, this is what your poem reminds me of :)
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
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Eh, not my kind of music, I tolerate this song though.
True concerning me too.
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Lunesra Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012
'Eh, and I know karma's gonna get me back for being so cooold, eh, like a big bad wolf I'm born to bad and bad to the booone.' I loved that song when it came out. Taio Cruz is pretty massive here (no surprises considering America's influence). But, are you talking about it from your standpoint or your girlfriend's?

And, the genres are quite similar though, what exactly is 'your' type of music?
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012
My type? Three Days Grace, Mayday Parade, Skillet, Folk Music, Country, I like pretty much all kinds of music. It's just dependent on the artist and the style they used from that type of music on whether I like it or not. :)
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Lunesra Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
Heyyy, a little old school, considering how music has changed. But yeah, me too, I can appreciate all music except that really trashy techno-rap-pop combo shit when they can't decide what genre they are or what tempo they'll going at and decide to mash it all together and call it a song. Fffffff..
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
xDDD
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