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You cry for your sorrows and you bleed for your dreams,

Just always remember, this world is not what it seems.

You can be the best of friends and then disappear,

They'll just discard you, I know it's hard to hear.

 

But this has happened enough to me,

It's all everyone's been doing recently.

So here I lie, discarded, fearing to stand up,

Because what waits just isn't worth getting up.

 

Thrown away and lying in a puddle of mud and blood,

All the other times I got up, and wiped off the mud.

But this time, as I lie here, broken and bloody,

I don't want to get up, I want to be a dead body.

 

I know getting up is inevitable, because I will never give in,

But I really just want to give up and say that "I'm done in."

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BakuSpirit Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist
This is perfect.
Things change so quickly, so what's the point in labeling them, in cherishing them when they'll just end sooner or later.
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CharlieAlphaFoxtrot Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Don't give up on life. Death isn't going to solve everyone elses's problems. Life is just a game. There is no restart and you can't set the skill level (e.g. Easy, Normal, Expert), but like a knight who know that queen's coming for him, you must soldier on. As a knight you are expected to take out as many rivals as you can before you have no choice, but to throw in the boot. If not for yourself, do it for someone who loves you.
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Sutsuki-Sensei Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
Don't give up on everyone. There are some of us that won't leave. :hug:
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Zouriya Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
The only person you can unquestioningly rely on in life is yourself. You can't expect other people to offer that same certainty. If you can reach a place where you are content with yourself, regardless of the people or social situation in your life, then you'll find true friends who aren't petty and superficial, and learn to accept those that are.

You obviously are a very caring and loving person, otherwise you wouldn't be so hurt emotionally by the actions of other people. You should identify what you want and need out of life; if you want to dedicate your life to a specific goal (maybe helping people) then pursue that because without greater purpose we all would be consumed by these overwhelming emotions.

You've got to look out for yourself, more for the emotional side of your soul because that's what makes life worth living. It's not logical, rational or convenient, but it also doesn't have to control your life and make you feel worthless. But basing it on other people will always cause problems, because most people are only looking out for themselves.

This was a bit of a ramble, but I really just hope it helps in someway.
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
I don't believe the last part of the third paragraph. I just don't, and I never will.
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Zouriya Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
Well when I personally interact with people, neither do I. That's why I said 'most' people. And I guess my assumption there is that you're young like me and around people your own age. My own negative experiences coming out, I suppose.
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013
Nope, not young.
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LivingInMyThoughts Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
:hug:
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Student Writer
:tighthug:
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WinterWolf10 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
:hug: I'm sorry you feel like this. I know how it feels as well. :(
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dragonofyang Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely. :heart: I know how it is.
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Diluculi Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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Midda-the-Cat Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I feel this way very rarely.
I have only one true friend, at least I think so... Though I try to never call her a best friend. I'm scared of this word. People use it very carelessly.
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
:huggle: I know dem feels. My one best friend is Mogwai.
Sticks with me through whatever I do, though I get abandoned by everyone else.
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Midda-the-Cat Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:huggle:
Well, me and my friend are absolute opposites X3 But paradoxically we understand each other very well. I don't mind her manga-anime-Japanese obsession, she doesn't mind mine - mix of games, art and cats etc. Whenever I try to talk about my interests to others, they're like O_o and I just shut up.
However, we meet very seldom...
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
XD Hang out more often then :P And your obsession with cats is the only odd one :P
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Midda-the-Cat Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hah, that's not so easy X3 You don't know how hard is for us to synchronize. Big distance separates our homes. Too big. But only one year and I'll go to high school which means going to city centre definitely more often :meow: It'll be easier to meet
Pfft, I thought cat obsession is the most tolerated one X3
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
You're good enough at drawing for it to be a good thing, and gaming, a lot of people are obsessed with xD The cats are the weirdest outta the three.
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Midda-the-Cat Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Okay then X3
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DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Professional Writer
:huggle:
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SpartanGinger Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Student General Artist
Never give up Reaper, I've been here, I know how painful it can be to be tossed aside by people you thought were your freinds, to be forgotten, ignored, to watch someone you care for turn into something you can't stand, to fall down and not get back up, I feel you, and I'll pray for you. I used to whisper 'dum spiro pugno' "while I breathe, I fight" to keep myself going sometimes, but it was worth it; to not grow cold, to keep my heart open despite the scars. its worth it! Keep fighting, don't give up! it's worth it to keep going; I found my real, true freind becuase I didn't give up. you will too.
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