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I know I'm in denial,

Saying I don't love her.

But I still say it all the while,

Because I have been hurt.

 

I know I should stop this,

I know I should just face it.

But I can't face up to this,

I can only run away from it.

 

I know that I still love her,

I would take her back in a heartbeat,

But as I can't have her,

I lie to myself, looking down at my feet.

 

I know that I still love her,

But Denial is my only friend.

My first proper sonnet, in the entire formation of it etc.
I hate re-reading this piece, it reminds me I'm still in denial.
And just afraid to do anything about it...
And I can hear my broken heart beat when I read it.
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Student Writer
And now, I think, Denial needs to meet Acceptance, hopefully in the future.
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012
Trying to...
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:iconcontradictory55:
Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Student Writer
:nod: I wish you achieve your goal then.
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the-golden-eagle Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
beautiful
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Ilnoitra Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Not to be an ass or anything, but it is not a proper sonnet.

Sonnets are 14 lines with 10 syllables each line, go through and count it my friend, there is no line with 10.
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012
To be quite honest, someone pointed this out to me.
Also pointed out it's meant to be 6-6-2.
I had no clue apart from "meant to be 14 lines"
No one was there to help me, so I did my best :shrug:
It's an alright poem, sonnet or not.
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Ilnoitra Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ok, I did not mean to be rude, and yes it is a wondeful poem.
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012
It's fine :)
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schnarre Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012
...Been in the same spot (still am actually), so I can sympathize!
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cheesecakedinosaur Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012
denial aint just a river in Egypt, u know
why cant u hav her?
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