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These things seem to rule my life,

Some people hate me and cause me strife,

Others think me a hero, ready to sacrifice myself.

Many think me noble, but you can decide that yourself.

 

Contradictions, they rule my life, "Why did she break up with you?"

A complete and utter list of contradictions, all of which I tell you,

"Does she love you?" I answer she says so, and I love her too.

A contradiction follows, "But then why did she break-up with you?"

 

That's the mystery, the greatest contradiction of all, to all of you,

But no, I leave out one thing, the thing that kills me inside too.

"I'm just... I'm not happy." What she said, word for word,

And I cry now, because what she said did not go unheard.

 

 

Even my muse is broken...
It made me break the usual structure to my poetry.
Four Stanzas of Four Lines each.
Everything is broken, including my heart.
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xMoonlightAngelx Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:tears:
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Kailani-e Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
: ( I'm so sorry. :hug:
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DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012  Professional Writer
:huggle:
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:iconforgotten-reaper:
Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012
.... :huggle: Look at my others? The featured one is quite good I think... And then there's the most recent one.
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012  Professional Writer
I did read each one of them :iconbackhug:
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SECRET-NINJA-SUPER-M Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012   General Artist
It's so sad.. but the feeling really comes through
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Student Writer
:tighthug: Oh...=(
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The-K10 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012
I stand alone looking out into the grey sky wondering to myself 'when there are two people that have such a wonderful love how can there be such a horrible pain?'
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:iconforgotten-reaper:
Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012
Hah, good question...
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:iconthe-k10:
The-K10 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012
I generally try to stay away from bad ones... generally.
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