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Yes, I still want you.

But do I still need you?

I need you like fire thirsts for water,

I need you like a cactus craves the sun.

I need you like a bird needs its wings clipped,

I need you as penance for all I have done.

 

Yet I still want you,

When your eyes are purgatory itself.

There is no passion in that fire,

But I want that simple burning hatred.

I need you like a child needs to plunge its hand into fire,

And yet you still glint and catch my eye and I want you.

 

I want you and need you,

Like I want and need the world to end.

You are my armageddon,

And your name is Jennifer.

A very old poem that I found and thought "What the Hell?" But yeah, there ya go.
Sorry to :iconacousticrose: if you ever do actually bother to read this. (This is about four months old by the way)
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Gary-thedreamingpoet Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Professional Writer
Strong, heartfelt and beautiful, I enjoyed this :)
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013
Thank you ^^ Hey Gary, question, do you like to role-play?
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Gary-thedreamingpoet Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Professional Writer
Never tried (outside of the obvious of course!) why?
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013
:iconthe-ice-and-fire-war: I'd be honoured if you gave it a go and joined the group, made a character ^^" It's like writing a book with other people, you put forward a sentence you think suits your character and then they follow suit etc. ^^" I'd be so happy if you gave it a go Gary, it'd also give me an opportunity to talk to you more often :D You don't have to be on all the time or anything xD Just join and come in when you have the time :)
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Gary-thedreamingpoet Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Professional Writer
You are deeply perceptive my young friend...
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013
I know you people. *eye roll* I'll check with her that it's okay, but I imagine she'll be fine with it. :)
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LadyAster Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awww <3
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Lunacella Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice!
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