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All that I have, I give to you.
My mind, my body, my soul, all to you.
I give you my everything, treat it with care,
And all that I ask from you is you keep your flare.

That one thing, that magic, that spark that drew me to you,
All that I have, I give to you, do with it whatever you want to.
All that I ask is that you let me love you,
And that you tell me that you love me too.

All that I have, I give to you,
I give everything, all of it, to you,
All that I ask in return is you let me love you,
That you believe I love you, and that you love me too.

 

Jennifer, I give you my everything, because I love you.

All that I have :heart:
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xMoonlightAngelx Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I felt it in your words. You gave her All of you..........
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alTered-Affliction Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful, expressive poem. Great work!
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Kailani-e Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
^_^ Pretty poem
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LivingInMyThoughts Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012
This is so sweet. This Jennifer girl is very lucky. :)
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suzukoyan Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Student Artisan Crafter
amazing, jennifer is lucky
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Tinkerbellluv Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012
Beautiful. <3
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WinterWolf10 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I love how you repeated "all that I have" throughout this piece. I also love the beat and the flow it has. :D
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gothchick913 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
this is sooooo beautiful
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